Friday, February 9, 2007

Simile- Her eyes were glazed with a fever, making her…

Her eyes were glazed with a fever, making her look like a wet towel soaked in water. When she got up her stomach hurt like a needle going thought skin. She was all sick and everyone knew just by looking at her. She was the saddest little girl as sad as a duck losing her mother. When her mom had walked in a gave her some soup she was glad but didn’t want to eat anything that she thought that would make her sick to her stomach. She was bad she looked like an egg as green as it rote. I think this girl should go to the hospital and get hr self checked up before she gets hurt and worst than a lion getting into a fight with a zebra. This girl was as small as a bear cub and she was as shy as a turtle. She was not older than a 6th grader but she was small enofe for her to be broken into half like a tooth pick. She was so sick that she looked like a bad infected toenail. When we got to the door of the doctors office we they were so surprised at the way she looked. The thought that the dead had walked into the office. When the doctor had told her to lie down she laded like a cat on the floor taking a nap. I thought that she had made her self at home. When he was checking her he had said that all she needs is to be taken care of. All she had was a bad common cold. She looked worst in person. At the end the doctor had prescribed some medicine. At the end when she felt better she was well rested like the sun in the brightest it could be. She was better and she was glad boy she wished from that moment on that she would never get as bad as a sick puppy.

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